Writing Strategies B

1. Freewriting
2. Announcements
3. Unit 1: Essay organization (feedback 2)
• instructor’s feedback on the second draft of the TV essay
• grammar exercise
4. Unit 2: Comparison-contrast
   • revised outline peer review
   • instructor’s feedback
5. Announcements/Homework

By Thursday, December 1:
1.  Essay two revised outline by email. 11月22日の宿題欄を確認してください。

By Sunday, December 4:
1. WW 2-09 peer feedback
2. Weekly Writing 2-10

Before next class:
1. Essay one third draft @ Moodle. ファイル名は ID LastName FirstName Essay One Third Draft (ex: 1999999 Hokkai Taro Essay Essay One Draft)。Word 97-2003文書で保存してください。

1. Freewriting
2. Announcements
3. Unit 1: Essay organization
• Instructor’s feedback on the second draft of the TV essay
4. Unit 2: Comparison-contrast
   • outline peer review (worksheet)
   • instructor’s feedback
5. Announcements/Homework

By Sunday, November 27:
1. WW 2-08 peer feedback
2. Weekly Writing 2-09

Before next class:
1. Essay one third draft @ Moodle. ファイル名は ID LastName FirstName Essay One Third Draft (ex: 1999999 Hokkai Taro Essay Essay One Draft)。Word 97-2003文書で保存してください。
2. Essay two revised outline* @ Moodle. ファイル名は ID LastName FirstName Essay Two Revised Outline (ex: 1999999 Hokkai Taro Essay Two Revised Outline)。Word 97-2003文書で保存してください。

*第1パラグラフは完成させてください。
第2-6パラグラフはアウトライン（完成された topic sentence とキーワードの supporting ideas）を。
第2パラグラフと第4パラグラフには similarity/difference unit topic sentence を入れてください。
第7パラグラフは完成させてください。

1. Freewriting
2. Announcements
3. Unit 2: Comparison-contrast
   • lecture (model essay; lecture note 1)
   • model essay analysis (lecture note 2)
   • brainstorming (lecture note 3)
4. Announcements/Homework

By Sunday, November 20:
1. WW 2-07 peer feedback
2. Weekly Writing 2-08

Before next class:
1. Make an outline* for the unit 2 essay (Otaru or Hakodate) and submit it @ Moodle.  ファイル名は ID LastName FirstName Essay Two Outline (ex: 1999999 Hokkai Taro Essay Two Outline)。Word 97-2003文書で保存してください。

*以下を含んだものにしてください：
1st para: thesis statement
2nd para (similarity 1): similarity unit topic sentence, paragraph topic sentence (& list of examples)
3rd para (similarity 2): paragraph topic sentence (& list of examples)
4th para (difference 1): difference unit topic sentence paragraph topic sentence (& list of examples)
5th para (difference 2): paragraph topic sentence (& list of examples)
6th para (difference 3): paragraph topic sentence (&  list of examples)
7th paragraph:  concluding sentence & final thoughts (recommendation)

1. Freewriting
2. Announcements
3. Unit 1: Essay organization
   • essay 1: influence of television
     • instructor’s feedback (feedback)
     • revision instruction
4. Unit 2: Comparison-contrast
   • lecture (model essay; lecture note 1)
   • model essay analysis (lecture note 2)
   • brainstorming (lecture note 3)
5. Announcements/Homework

By Sunday, November 13:
1. WW 2-06 peer feedback
2. Weekly Writing 2-07

Before next class:
1. Revise your essay on TV and submit it @ Moodle. ファイル名は ID LastName FirstName Essay One Second Draft (ex: 1999999 Hokkai Taro Essay One Second Draft)。Word 97-2003文書で保存してください。
2. Do the brainstorming exercise on similarities and differences between Otaru and Hakodate on leture note 3.